literature

Trust Issues.

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Prefect-storm
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Literature Text

I want to lead you through this maze,
the one of my creation.
Help you tear down the walls that I've had up for so long.

I want to show you everything,
because time and time again, you've proven worthy.
You've proven your love.

But I'm afraid
because they've all promised to stay,
then walked away.
Letting me break all over again.

And, baby, I know you won't do that me.
I swear i do,
but it's just trust issues.
i have really bad trust issues. i feel bad because i do trust my boyfriend. but almost everyone i have trusted has hurt me, betrayed me, left me for dead.
how do you get over something like that?

but i'm trying to get over them, i really am. i just i knew how to. :/
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elthereia
Let me start by saying that this is a beautiful piece. The voice that speaks to me as I read this is haunting, it appeals to me as it will to many others. The way you've used the formatting adds effect. For example, putting the words, 'break all over again' in bold indicates that the people before has had a massive impact on you, I think if you didn't add in the bold, it would mean a lot less.
This piece makes me feel not alone. I too have had extremely difficult times where I couldn't trust anyone. This is mainly down to my family betraying me though. But yes, I do love the structure and the simple, but effective words you've used.
Overall, this was a very enjoyable and emotional read that is heading straight to my favourites! :clap: